Friday, February 29, 2008
CONTEST DAY 5

Well, Friday is here. Yeah! I'm posting an excerpt from my first book Finally Home which is available in print or e-book.


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“You want a partner? My twenty thousand, my equipment, my horses, and my indoor riding arena.”


She heard Alex suck in his breath. It was such an illogical proposition that she didn’t think he’d go for it in a million years. After all, what did they have together? An unhappy past, and a rocky, although passionate reunion? How did that constitute a solid foundation for what she suggested?
She didn’t dare look at him. Most likely he looked shocked. Or disgusted. Or just really amused.


“We’re just talking a business partnership here, right?” he asked.


Something in his voice, a seductive, suggestive tone caused her to finally turn her eyes to him. He looked down at her, the slightest smile on his lips. So he wasn’t mad or offended. Instead of laughter, he gave her a look that sucked her in, caressed her heart.


“Of course just business. We barely know each other.” She tried to sound outraged, but fell short of her mark.


Alex chuckled. “Well, I think it’s a little late to be worrying about things like that, princess. We seem to have passed the spot where we can keep it on an impersonal level.”


Torie stood abruptly. She needed to get away from him. Needed to think with a clear head, and having him sit so close she could smell his subtle cologne unnerved her.


“Come on, Alex,” she pleaded. “Just tell me if this is something you’d be interested in. If you’re not, just say it and I’ll leave you alone.”


“I think your idea has a lot of merit. From a financial standpoint, it makes good sense. I’d save a great deal of money if we could move your arena. Wouldn’t have to buy more stock. I have four good horses out in South Dakota I plan to bring east, and with yours, we could have a good sta-ble and still have room for boarders. My partnership with the ranch has worked out just fine, but, of course, there’s one burning question. Who’d get the house?”


Torie looked up at the dark bulk of the Cape Cod glowing in the moonlight. Such a warm house. One that could provide a good, happy life.


“I’ll take the apartment over the barn,” she conceded. It would be worth it. Anything would be worth it to get out of the fix her mother had thrown her into.


“I’ll agree to this only if you explain to me why? My thinking is that with your father’s death, he’ll leave you enough to buy another place outright. I know you love Avalon, but why bother with a partnership?”


Torie came back and sat on the edge of the deck.


“Long story short, he’s not leaving me anything. I don’t want to go into details, Alex. But what I’m offering here is everything I have in the world.”


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QUESTION: What is Torie's dad leaving her?


Email your answers to cerihebert@comcast.net


Winner will get picked tonight!


Well, didn't much done last night. The power kept going off and my husband was sent home from work because of it. It was an action packed night though, fire department being sent everywhere, accidents all over the place. And it wasn't even snowing! It was a nice clear night. Don't know what was going on.


So I only got some editing done. Oh well, there's always next week

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Tuesday, February 26, 2008
THE GOOD THE BAD AND THE CONTEST
THE GOOD: Yesterday was a great day for the contest. Lots of entries! Thanks to everyone who played! I hope you'll visit back all week. Leave a comment if you'd like. I love doing stuff like this!

THE BAD: A) I visited the doctor yesterday and I have tendonitis in my right arm. Greeeaaattt. What every author (who happens to work full time as a data entry clerk) wants to hear. So I'm on meds to see if that'll stop it. AND then I got home and my desk top decided not to let me onto the internet. My DH checked it out briefly, ran a virus scan and has no idea what happened. I hope there's a way to fix it, even if it means scrubbing it out and starting from scratch with it. So I'm on my laptop now.

And now for the contest.


TODAY IS RELEASE DAY FOR SWEET FOREVER IN
PRINT!!!!


I am so thrilled to see this one in print. It's available over at Samhain Publishing as well as at Amazon, Barnes and Noble and Borders and many many other places.
Todays excerpt is going to be from Finally Home which is currently available from Whiskey Creek Press in both print and e-book format.
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When she was younger, Torie had never felt comfortable in the master suite. Whether it was because her father shared it, or she feared knocking one of the priceless statues down, she didn’t know. Even today she tucked her arms in tight to her sides and held her breath.

Her mother, dressed in an ivory silk robe, sat at her large mahogany Edwardian desk, gold pen in hand. The graceful and elegant Lillian Barron had returned. Even the dark circles under her eyes, like shadows against her pale skin, looked regal. Someone had done her hair. A diamond-and-ruby hair comb winked in the soft light. Her mother wore tragedy well.

The woman looked up as Torie approached, a frown marring an otherwise perfect face.

"I’ve been wondering where you’ve been." Her eyes still had a flash to them, the same emotion Torie had seen the night before. Cold and accusing. Not one ounce of forgiveness for the previous night’s supposed transgression.

"I’m sorry. I needed to go out and clear my head," Torie whispered, knowing a powerful storm brewed behind her mother’s calm façade.

"Oh, and were you out ‘clearing your head’ with that man you were with last night? What’s his name? Alex Carmichael?"

Blood rushed to Torie’s face. She beat away the anger that built in her chest. How in the world did she know about that? She remained silent, afraid she might say something she’d regret.

"So, apparently I’m right, or you’d deny it." Lillian’s voice rose several degrees. "Oh, Victoria, how could you?"

"How could I what, Mother? Talk to a man?" Torie shrugged her shoulders, trying to appear indifferent, when inside she shook with indignation. She knew, just by the way her mother scrutinized her, she knew a whole lot more than she was letting on.

"Don’t try that with me, young lady," her mother snapped. "I got a phone call this morning from Helen Worthington. She and her husband were at the club last night. Driving home, they saw two people at the side of the road going at it like animals. Was this how I raised you to behave? I cannot tell you how humiliating your behavior is. And after what he did to Gabriella Marino. He should be in jail."

"Mother, you don’t know what you’re saying," said Torie. Even she knew quite well, when her mother got on this kind of rant, nothing would soothe her. And there was no way in hell she’d believe the truth about Alex.

"Don’t I?" Her voice raised another octave. "He’s no better than a rapist, Victoria. A good-for-nothing who took advantage of a young girl so he could get ahead and get her family’s money. He should thank his lucky stars Frank Marino didn’t press charges. I just want to weep to think he’s trying to wheedle his way into this family."

Lillian’s tirade threatened to take on the proportions of a major storm. Torie tried to put it down to the fact she was understandably overwrought over her loss, and that Torie was the most convenient outlet. Arguing the point that her mother was just plain wrong would be futile. So Torie stayed silent, and like a twelve-year-old, took the scolding.

"Things are going to change around here, Victoria. You’ll not have anymore to do with that man." She pounded her fist on the desk. "Absolutely nothing."

"Mother, you’re wrong about Alex. Gabriella and her father are full of hot air. The only thing he’s guilty of is trusting the wrong people. I’m a grown woman and quite capable of choosing my own friends."

"Things will change here," Lillian repeated, her voice dead calm. "I will not have someone like that sniffing around my daughter or my money. You will not have any contact with him from this moment on. You will go change your clothes and go downstairs, and you will treat Kendall with the respect he deserves to make up for your disgraceful behavior last night."

Torie mustered up every ounce of courage she could find. "No. You won’t order me around like I’m a child. I can’t help what other people say about Alex, but I know him better than that. So far, he’s shown more character than Kendall."

Lillian stood and blazed across the carpet to her, her blue eyes flaring with anger. "How long have you been seeing him, Victoria? A week? Less? Certainly a pitifully short amount of time to be throwing yourself at him like a common whore."

Torie’s hand flew out, landing straight and hard against her mother’s cheek. Both gasped in unison. Lillian touched her cheek, which fast turned pink, her eyes wide with disbelief.
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There we go.
So, todays question is: Who saw Torie and Alex on the side of the road?
Easy! Just email me the answer to cerihebert@comcast.net to be entered into the contest to win a FREE SIGNED COPY OF SWEET FOREVER!
I look forward to everyone's responses!
Have a great day!

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posted by Ceri Hebert @ 1:43 AM   1 comments
Thursday, January 3, 2008
The Cold That Wouldn't Die
Okay, this is ridiculous. I've been living with this cold for about a month now and it's getting old. It did start to go away but then it came back. Yeh, I should go to a doctor but they'll only tell me to get some cold medicine off the shelf and I'll have wasted a copay and an hour-long round trip drive with 4 kids. No, I'd rather ride it out.

Oh, and if John McCain gets a cold in the next few days it'll be my fault. I was rubbing elbows with him (literally) at a house party the other day. That was cool, but what wasn't cool was being caught on the national news. Well, that had been a dream of mine way back when, like 20 years ago. Not to rub elbows with McCain but being on television.

My writing has come to a standstill. My muse right now is curled up on the couch with some chicken noodle soup, a box of kleenex and a blanket. I, however, have been reading a manuscript that I put aside last year. That Kind Of Magic is actually really good. I'm looking forward to getting back to it. After I finish Dreamer's Sea. Okay, I have to finish DS this month. That is my resolution!

I've done a good job over the past few years of not making resolutions. I need to change that. Okay, maybe I shouldn't say resolution, that should be a 4 letter word. Things I want to accomplish in 2008:

Finish Dreamer's Sea (in January)
Submit DS to agents and snag one.
Write sequel to Sweet Forever
Edit That Kind Of Magic
Find home for the above manuscripts

Well, thats a good start anyway.

REMINDER: Finally Home is up for Best Romance Book of 2007 in the long ebook catagory over at The Long And The Short Of It . The polls are open now and I'd love a vote. There's a lot of very talented writers over there and I'm so honored to be amongst them. So vote now, but only one vote per person.

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Sunday, September 2, 2007
I'M THE FEATURED AUTHOR
Starting Monday Sept 3rd I'll be the featured author at The Long And The Short Of It, a brand new review site that offers so much more!

They've already reviewed all three of my books and have had such success since they started this site. I'm very excited about being a part of it.

In honor of being featured author I'll be holding a contest beginning Monday Sept 3rd. Each day I'll be posting an excerpt from one of my three books and I'll be asking a trivia question from that excerpt. Each winning answer will be eligible for a drawing at the end of the week to win an autographed copy of Finally Home.

Answers to the trivia questions can be sent to
cerihebert@comcast.net

Good luck all!

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Tuesday, August 28, 2007
New Review for Finally Home
Yeah! With a little ouch on the end. Novelspot reviewed Finally Home. All in all I'm pleased and I really can't say she's wrong on the editing comment. I have to admit that editing Finally Home was horrible, I mean editing it AFTER it had been accepted by Whiskey Creek Press. It was truly a lesson for me and I was shocked that I had missed so much before I submitted it to WCP. It wasn't pretty and obviously I'd missed some stuff.

Well, anyway, here's the review:


Author:
Ceri Hebert
Publisher:
Whiskey Creek Press
ISBN:
Electronic 978-1-59374-812-8
Rating:
8


Review:
Love sucks! It can be the most wonderful thing in the world when it's right. When you find you love someone who loves someone else, though, well… love sucks! Ceri Hebert, in her debut novel with Whiskey Creek Press, takes this dilemma through all of its paces in Finally Home.


Victoria Barron, who prefers to be called "Torie," is the poor little rich girl who adores horses, much to the displeasure of her high-class mother. Her father doesn't seem to care, one way or the other, as long as Torie stays out of his way. He's too busy making millions to be bothered by a daughter. Torie hates her life, except when she gets to go to the Carter Hills Stables to ride and care for her horse.

Another benefit of hanging around at the stable is getting to watch Alex Carmichael, the stable hand. Unfortunately, Alex is wrapped up in Gabriella Marino, the boss's daughter, and he outwardly despises Torie for being rich. It doesn't take long for Gabriella's true nature to drive Alex away from the stable, and the state of New Hampshire. Torie continues to work with her horse and, over the coming years, yearns to fulfill her dream: owning Avalon Farm.

Alex Carmichael had nothing good to say to Torie in their younger years. He called her "Princess," just to irritate her, and it worked famously. Now, nine years later, when his ailing aunt needs him, he returns from South Dakota to care for the woman who raised him after his parents died. Visiting a horse show, he watches Torie as she wins the blue ribbon and silver cup in her class. He has to admit she's become a fine rider, and a better than fine looking woman.
Wanting a closer look, just as she stumbles and is about to fall into a mud puddle, Alex gets the chance to get his hands on her. She's not exactly friendly when he keeps her from falling, but that one touch kindles the fire that will become a raging romance between the self-made man and the Princess.

Finally Home is the story of two people working together to overcome their past and their differences to realize a dream they both share. Misunderstandings along the way drive a wedge between the two short-fused, hardheaded lovers, but will their future be as bleak as they are making it? Alex and Torie create a lot of their own misery. Every time I thought they finally got their act together, another misunderstanding cropped up and one or the other of the hotheads went off on a tangent. When they kissed and made up, though, it was worth suffering the fight.

I was surprised by a lack of editing in a few places but the full-bodied story made it worthy of
finishing. This is the reason I was only able to give a rating of 8 quills.

Finally Home is a great read. If you love near misses at Paradise, some saucy love scenes under an open sky, or want to learn more about horses, I recommend you gallop on over and pick up a copy of Finally Home right now.

Reviewed By MargeAnna Conrad© August 2007

So, that wasn't completely horrible and an 8 out of 10 is very good.

I didn't get much done in the way of writing yesterday and I probably won't today either. I had to take my younger DD to the doctor. She's been feeling unwell for the past few weeks. They think its only a viral thing and should be okay for school tomorrow. I hope so. Today I have to visit my dad and SD wants to visit the school again. Oh, and then there's all that pesky work I have to do. I'm supposed to get all kinds of overtime but yesterday was a wash. I hate it when all I want to do is write but I can't. Then when I CAN write I have a block. It's just cruel.

Speaking of cruel, it's time to get ready for work. Maybe I'll go in early.

Off I go.

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The Legacy:


DREAMERS SEA (REDUX):


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